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Missing
Contributed by
shelby
on
Saturday, 18th October 2008 @ 10:31:35 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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The dungeon seems closer than I thought.
The demons are out at play.
Leaves are falling to the ground
chill of impending frost soon on the way.
Harvest moon has been out at night.
The clouds trying to blind its blue glow.
Atop the lofty mountains peaks
with the change of seasons, dusted with snow.
Inside these lines of wilderness,
where life has gone astray.
Gone are the moments of good ol times
and life as known along the way.
The world spins round and round.
Seasons come and go.
Things are tossed out to the wind
the air feels like the freeze of snow.
Copyright ©
shelby
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2008-10-18 22:31:35]
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Re: Missing
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by emystar on
Sunday, 19th October 2008 @ 12:20:09 AM AEST
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Girl,
Your writing just keeps on getting better.
awesome.
huggs, smiles, blessings,
emy |
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Re: Missing
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by karoody on
Sunday, 19th October 2008 @ 01:20:17 AM AEST
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michelle~
it's almost like a dream what is seen sometimes. you wake up one day and look at your life and just don't recognize it anymore. you are such a strong person, whether it feels like it now or not, we will see brighter days on the other side of this.
love you bunches
smiles and blessings
kara
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Re: Missing
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by jerseysue on
Sunday, 19th October 2008 @ 02:48:53 AM AEST
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| This is such a truthful and wonderful piece. Changes come and take away all nature of things. My life is testament to that. Your poetry is always good and so awe inspiring. Sue x |
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Re: Missing
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by Lovingangel4u on
Sunday, 19th October 2008 @ 06:14:03 AM AEST
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I love this piece a wonderful flow. I saw it as the changing of a season. I hope i got it right.
Thank you for ur work
~Lovingangel4u~ |
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Re: Missing
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 19th October 2008 @ 09:55:16 AM AEST
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michelle,
The picture your words paint is captured
through every line. The imagery is so
profound.
Awesome write.........Mike |
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Re: Missing
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by Crow on
Sunday, 19th October 2008 @ 02:30:31 PM AEST
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Hi Shel
sometimes I feel like this season locks Me away from the world somehow..good write my friend. Lane |
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