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conversation lost
Contributed by
shizzle
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Sunday, 19th October 2008 @ 05:38:10 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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we are all in are owN world to some degree
sometimes your wOrld can be torn apart
people come and go leaving my mind a mess.
peoples thoughts and prOblems breakdown the walls
that hold up my own. wheN i loose a thought where does
it go? is it subconciously swEpt under a rug when left to clean
up my thoughts and sort oUt my problems? it may be hard
to keep together but it caNt be torn apart because its only
made whole when my worlD is shared with somebody else
true peace comes in thE midst of chaos. i talk to
the best of my ability when youR words attack my thoughts, my
attention is paid at itS high cost, i try to find
the things to say in The cluddered closet
of my mind becAuse we all wear
are words if we doNt lie about are lives
your world is baseD on you so it is so
easily shattered by otherS that is why we feel alone
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shizzle
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2008-10-19 17:38:10]
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Re: conversation lost
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by karoody on
Sunday, 19th October 2008 @ 05:49:39 PM AEST
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wow! great write! you put so much into this. i look forward to more posts from you!
thank you
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Re: conversation lost
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by Ambivalence on
Monday, 20th October 2008 @ 01:05:28 AM AEST
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nice write. i noticed ur message in the middle "no one understands" and i'm pretty sure ur not alone concerning these emotions. take care
-K.Z. |
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