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Time rules us all
Contributed by
Voice of the Silent
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Monday, 20th October 2008 @ 04:29:10 PM in AEST
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This is in memory of my nana/grandma but this is also to let you all know those of you who think humans rule the earth your wrong time controls us all choosing when we live and when we die like they say it's only a matter of time
There really is not enough time
well at least not in my mind
We think we own this earth
but time rules all
and time sees that we eventually fall
Only two years ago
My grandma died
Time took her away
And i didn't have time to tell her all of what i wanted to say
There's not enough time
To enjoy the simplest things
All i want is to say bye
And that i love you
I wish you could have heard it before you died
What hurts me worst is the time of year
When you left us crying in tears
Time rules all
and it can be so cruel
it was a happy time of year
But then why am I in tears?
Merry Christmas to me
Can't you see
The only present i got was one i wouldn't take
But I had no choice to open and see
For on that Christmas
My grandmothers grave loomed under the tree
Time rules all
From time of birth
to time of death
It took what was mine
time slowly eroded my grandma's spirit till she died
like i said at least it's not in my mind
but i think there's never enough time
But then again what do i know
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Re: Time rules us all
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by outlawpoet on
Monday, 20th October 2008 @ 05:27:55 PM AEST
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| this is a good write i feel ya my dad died before i could say bye but time does not neccesarly set us up to fail we make our own lives through our decisions and attitude. just remember stormy wheather never lasts keep your head up darlin good write |
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Re: Time rules us all
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by emystar on
Monday, 20th October 2008 @ 06:56:45 PM AEST
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Well Kelly,
form this write I'd say you know a lot.
I've never really thought about things this way.
Loss of a luved is always hard as both my parents are deceased and my grand mothers have been deceased a long time.
good point and good writing.
huggs, blessings,
emy
Your granma is now your guardian angel watching over you. |
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Re: Time rules us all
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by karoody on
Tuesday, 21st October 2008 @ 03:06:56 AM AEST
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Kelly~
Bit of a tear jerker from you. Very beautifully done. I have seen you write several different ways. You do it all well.
As far as your subject here~goodbyes are so darn hard. Your words are too true. Time is so precious. I wish I knew a magical solution to stop your pain. All I got to offer is support. I have faith that she feels your love. Emy and Outlaw are speaking truth as well.
Anyway, I am always here to listen. drop me a line. I miss your Smiles in my mailbox! If you aren't smiling, I'll send you some of mine
love smiles blessings
kara |
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