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Even If
Contributed by
funnyface09
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Wednesday, 22nd October 2008 @ 12:39:25 AM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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I am trying to run away
Hiding myself from the truth
Away from feeling
Distancing myself from fantasy
The care I am suppressing
The love I shouldnt be having
I do not know how
To stop missing you here
When the heart long for just a simple
A simple hello from you
And I do not know why
Even when I drift into dreamland
I cant stop thinking about you
And wishing somehow
You miss me too
Even if it is just in my dreams
Even if it is just for a second
Copyright ©
funnyface09
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2008-10-22 00:39:25]
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Re: Even If
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 22nd October 2008 @ 01:28:23 AM AEST
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This is sad but well written.
I can relate from my past.
Years later after the pain passed I realized that my instincs of leaving were right.
Huggs,
emy
I sure hope you feel better really soon. |
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Re: Even If
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 22nd October 2008 @ 09:09:10 AM AEST
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| Nicely written, my experience has been though that even one more second would never be enough. |
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Re: Even If
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by karoody on
Thursday, 23rd October 2008 @ 08:19:14 AM AEST
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To day is the first chance I had to read your poetry. This is my second. I will definitely click on your name again!
You have said so much in so few words here. That takes talent!
Best of luck to you
Smiles love blessings
kara |
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