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I falling off the deep end
Contributed by
Voice of the Silent
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Wednesday, 22nd October 2008 @ 05:35:32 PM in AEST
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I think i'm going off the deep end
I think I'm going insane
I find myself always thinking
and running my fingers through my hair
and every day with little sleep less and less is there
I've fallen off the deep end
but as a fall
the air around me
doesn't feel like air at all
I fall slow as surronded by water
And when i hit the bottom
what happens to me?
at the bottom what will I see
I think i'll just sit there out of my mind
With one pass time
Counting each second
as they slowly tick by
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Voice of the Silent
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2008-10-22 17:35:32]
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Re: I falling off the deep end
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by outlawpoet on
Wednesday, 22nd October 2008 @ 06:05:22 PM AEST
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| this was a good write i apreciate your talent |
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Re: I falling off the deep end
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 22nd October 2008 @ 06:36:14 PM AEST
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Good writing.
Once you hit bottom, there's only one way to go and that's up.
Hang tuff.
Luv, huggs, prayer,
emy |
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Re: I falling off the deep end
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by karoody on
Thursday, 23rd October 2008 @ 03:05:01 AM AEST
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Kelly~
Great write as usual. Rest assured, you will not be down there alone. You are not screaming in silence. People are listening.
Love, smiles, blessings
kara |
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Re: I falling off the deep end
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by Lenore_Poe15 on
Friday, 24th October 2008 @ 09:03:30 AM AEST
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I really like the last stanza! Good write, love it
-Love Lenore |
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