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Vindication
Contributed by
outlawpoet
on
Wednesday, 22nd October 2008 @ 07:43:15 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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i feel pain sifting throughout my body
tearing through my veins and stealing its way into my heart
my knees shake and my hands tremble like an earthquake right under my feet
sweat pours down my face trickling over my eyes mixing with the tears i've cried
my soul feels blacker than ever as i question my own relevance in this world
i am nothing without you, only lost and confused
my heart feels misused and abused but is it my own fault
is it my own fault that i pushed you so far away
creating a distance between us that feels like a million miles
now I'm standing in the corner of the room all cried out
all my tears have made their way to the floor beneath me
i am waiting for you like deserts wait upon the rain
like a hobo waits upon a train
i understand i have done more wrong than right and have caused pain
and the pain i caused may or may not be unforgivable
but you are my world, my love, and the embassador of my nation
i know that i did you wrong and i am changing i am cleaning myself up
creating purity where there was only dust and dirt
i am waiting for my redemption for my vindication
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Re: Vindication
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by Jenni_K on
Wednesday, 22nd October 2008 @ 08:24:12 PM AEST
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This is a splendid piece of prose... I really enjoyed reading this. The emotions in this just jumped up and touched me... Great job..
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Re: Vindication
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by Loende on
Wednesday, 22nd October 2008 @ 09:21:43 PM AEST
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It's really very powerful. I'm glad that you just went with it, because it shows honesty and passion.
Great Job.
Be well,
Loende |
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Re: Vindication
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by karoody on
Thursday, 23rd October 2008 @ 02:58:57 AM AEST
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a painful read. but as loende and jenni stated, your emotions were pure and real. very raw. let those thoughts flow freely more often! offers a good read...
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Re: Vindication
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by shelby on
Friday, 24th October 2008 @ 12:23:09 AM AEST
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Incredible my friend. I have always loved the depth and honesty within the lines of your poetry.
Hugs
Michelle |
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