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words surround me
Contributed by
juliestevens18
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Wednesday, 22nd October 2008 @ 08:27:05 PM in AEST
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Colors and words surround me as I am blasted off into a sunset of grey
You would think that the colors who turn to green, because I am well on my way
Trying desperately to control what I know I cannot
Checking and rechecking the blood, it sits on mountain tops
I find it easier to lie than to test the true within me
because there is very little of me that is not strung in captivity
i hope and i pray that one day i will be let out
from these metal chains, that scream out doubt
You could help me, but I still wouldn't learn
Counting the hours till I can ask for what I yearn
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Re: words surround me
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by outlawpoet on
Wednesday, 22nd October 2008 @ 08:48:25 PM AEST
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| i truly understand a lot of what your saying here. good write |
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Re: words surround me
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by karoody on
Thursday, 23rd October 2008 @ 07:58:48 AM AEST
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such a soul searching write! what a mental picture you gave me. I feel this and i can relate! great write
thank you for sharing
love smiles blessings
kara |
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