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Holding Sanity like pebbles in our hand
Contributed by
lostrelic
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Thursday, 23rd October 2008 @ 09:13:21 PM in AEST
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Sitting on a ridged top snow and grey shallows surround the view
a pale weak wind passes its bitter chill whispering sweet dreams of sleep
radio song back drifting from all points
one push and all tranquil will slide
we have gotten lost
Fancy that we meet this way
two empty souls in this cascade of novelties and kitchenware
shinny bowls, cell phones and magazines all to dispose
techno trash and global whale songs lyrics we both know
and your surprised with this smirk on my face
this glimpse of design not as pure as your need
and empty hollows in eyes that you past loved
what do they care
lets sit and share this mellow glow that runs in the hearts of man
pointing and pushing until the fulcrum tips and sways
we will sip the nectar of worn out grapes and sour blood
faltering on this artificial chaos and puppets pulling strings of war
would it not be amazing if we both walk out holding sanity
like pebbles in our hands
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Re: Holding Sanity like pebbles in our hand
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by shizzle on
Thursday, 23rd October 2008 @ 11:36:20 PM AEST
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| this is a great poem!you truley have an awsome talent |
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Re: Holding Sanity like pebbles in our hand
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by shelby on
Friday, 24th October 2008 @ 01:03:57 AM AEST
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This just flowed, beautiful. A good way to end this crazy day.
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Re: Holding Sanity like pebbles in our hand
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by karoody on
Friday, 24th October 2008 @ 10:48:42 PM AEST
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Quite a different style for you as of late. I really enjoyed this one. You impress me with the way you write in so many different "languages." does that make sense to you? keep the writes coming....
love smiles blessings
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Re: Holding Sanity like pebbles in our hand
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by outlawpoet on
Sunday, 26th October 2008 @ 10:11:50 AM AEST
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i must agree with everyone, this is a great poem not my personal style mostly casue i dont work at it but i admire this piece
The Outlaw Poet |
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