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What do you do when everything seems so bleak
Contributed by
Voice of the Silent
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Friday, 24th October 2008 @ 06:14:32 PM in AEST
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What do you do when everything seems so bleak?
When the only thing you feel is weak?
Do you give up?
Do you throw in the towel?
Do you walk out and leave everyone who helped you get this far?
What do you do?
when you think your life is through?
I ask you what do you do?
I'll tell you what I think.
You plant your feet.
and take on the weight of your problems and your friends
But I'm worried now because I'm starting to sink
into the ground the weight is pushing me down
What do I do now?
that I've been buried in my problems of sorrow
never again to see the light of tomorrow
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Re: What do you do when everything seems so bleak
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by outlawpoet on
Friday, 24th October 2008 @ 07:37:55 PM AEST
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| good write man way to experss yourself. my advice hold on strong and stand tall keep your head held high keep fighting and never ever give up and if its your time to go dont go quietly |
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Re: What do you do when everything seems so bleak
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by karoody on
Friday, 24th October 2008 @ 10:10:36 PM AEST
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Kelly~
Great write you got here. You're showing us a fighter. I have faith in you. And you have many friends that feel the same I know.
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Re: What do you do when everything seems so bleak
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 24th October 2008 @ 10:45:00 PM AEST
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| woah extremely powerful. i had the tendency to sink into isolation, it's not the right choice, trust me. |
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Re: What do you do when everything seems so bleak
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by Jenni_K on
Friday, 24th October 2008 @ 11:12:50 PM AEST
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I read this poem earlier but didn't comment, simply because I was in a situation earlier in the year that seemed so bleak.... and everyone kept telling me to be strong etc etc... But I wasn't... I took the easy way out..but you know something... I am so much happier now. I do not regret my decision in any way.
Great write, btw..I didn't mean to minimize it in any way by my rambling...
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Re: What do you do when everything seems so bleak
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by deadwriter on
Saturday, 25th October 2008 @ 01:38:10 PM AEST
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It is a true friend who while having problems of their own, helps their friends with what they are going through. As the weight pushes you a little deeper into the ground, remember that the strongest tree has its roots buried deep beside you. aspire to be like the mighty tree and you will rise tall above all that has you burdened at this time. DO NOT GIVE UP. STAND TALL AND PROUD. Remember that there are also those around you who look upon you as a friend and will help carry your load as well. Strength in numbers.
The inbox is always open.
Deadwriter
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Re: What do you do when everything seems so bleak
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by heartfelt on
Saturday, 25th October 2008 @ 04:10:14 PM AEST
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| really gets me thinking about what you had going when you wrote that. i liked it tho. nice work |
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