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WHY?
Contributed by
TheOneandOnly
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Saturday, 25th October 2008 @ 02:08:27 AM in AEST
Topic:
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WHY?
Thats what I dont understand
I can see it in your eyes
Hear it in your voice
But yet you wont even give us a chance
Youll talk to me for hours on end
Laugh at my jokes
Listen to my problems
But you avoid me at every chance
So I try to be patient
And give you space
But then you tell me
It wont work out.
What?
You never gave us a chance
Every time, there was an excuse
Wrong place
Wrong time
To fast
So I finally give up
And you get mad
Because Ive moved on
And Im no longer sad
Copyright ©
TheOneandOnly
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2008-10-25 02:08:27]
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Re: WHY?
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by heartfelt on
Saturday, 25th October 2008 @ 11:10:35 AM AEST
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| really like the way you wrote that. so simple yet says so much. keep it up! |
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Re: WHY?
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by shelby on
Saturday, 25th October 2008 @ 08:56:25 PM AEST
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Isn't that they way it goes??
Great write, loved the way you wrote it.
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Re: WHY?
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by Jenni_K on
Saturday, 25th October 2008 @ 09:53:23 PM AEST
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All I can say is some people cannot commit... and maybe this is so in your friend's case... Good write though...emotions well presented..
Jenni |
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