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Back in Iraq
Contributed by
navydocny
on
Saturday, 25th October 2008 @ 05:46:06 PM in AEST
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Cricket is chirping
Rain turns the sand into mud
Back to start my toil
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Re: Back in Iraq
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by shelby on
Saturday, 25th October 2008 @ 05:51:51 PM AEST
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Loved this.Short but strong.
Well I cant give you the sound of crickets either today.
Just a bunch of truck noise etc......lol
Be careful over there
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Michelle |
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Re: Back in Iraq
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by Jenni_K on
Saturday, 25th October 2008 @ 07:11:43 PM AEST
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Lovely as usual..
The only cricket I am hearing is the Stanford 20-20....
Hope your visit home left you with lots of memories to take you through your stay in Iraq...
Hugs
Jenni |
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Re: Back in Iraq
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by karoody on
Saturday, 25th October 2008 @ 11:07:14 PM AEST
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i don't get to hear those either. funny the things you miss...
good to see your name on the board. take care of yourself.
love smiles blessings
kara |
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Re: Back in Iraq
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 26th October 2008 @ 11:58:11 AM AEST
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Steve, your haikus are always so powerful. I don't know if it's the words, or
the sentiment, or the fact that you've made your readers privy to certain
circumstances or all three together. Regardless of reason, your work
moves through the heart with directed emotion. This seems more sad to
me than it first appears ...
Take care of you and come back SOON!
~ Breezy
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Re: Back in Iraq
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by Lilymaemax on
Sunday, 26th October 2008 @ 05:19:13 PM AEST
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Be careful and keep enlightening us with your thoughts thru your amazing poems.
.Its great that despite your circumstances you can still think of nature.What does that say about you??Lilymae |
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