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you do not care
Contributed by
lostforgood
on
Thursday, 20th March 2003 @ 12:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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I do not understand,
You say you care
And that youre there for me.
But why is it that Im still alone?
Im crying, the tears fall fast
The end is coming,
You all know.
But yet you stand there watching me,
Crying silently
Dying slow
And say you yet Im here, I care
Stop saying that!
You arent here.
You dont care.
Cuz Im still crying,
Im still dying,
And the end is still coming.
I need someone
To stop talking,
I do not need a hug or words
I need to be held through this.
But yet again,
I am still alone
Crying, dying, trying.
The end, it draws near.
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2003-03-20 12:05:00]
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Re: you do not care
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 21st March 2003 @ 06:11:10 AM AEST
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Great poem even if it is a bit contradictive. You are saying that you want people to stop saying that care - "I do not need a hig or words, I need to be held ththrough this".
You want help but only if it is genuine? I am guessing that is what you are saying. I can relate.
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Re: you do not care
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by SuicidalSon on
Friday, 21st March 2003 @ 08:34:40 AM AEST
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Figured Id read something of yours Not to bad
when I first started writing about suicide I thought nobody would understand but now I see alot of people feel the same Keep up the good writes someone is bound to understand
I know I do |
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