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A Second Thought
Contributed by
allforyou
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Saturday, 25th October 2008 @ 09:28:11 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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A thought of mine for thought by you,
in hopes that you can think it through.
I've waited longer than I should,
fearing i'd be misunderstood.
It's harder now to spit it out,
for in my mind; a shadowed doubt.
A misconception; an uttered word,
a second thought you never heard.
Burried deep inside my brain,
collecting dust, suppressing pain.
The words to say, I cannot find,
oh whatever, nevermind.
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allforyou
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2008-10-25 21:28:11]
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Re: A Second Thought
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by outlawpoet on
Sunday, 26th October 2008 @ 10:08:58 AM AEST
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rhythm and rhyme, thats my kind of poem
good work darlin and ya hope there is no truth that lies underneath |
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Re: A Second Thought
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by unknown_utopia on
Tuesday, 3rd August 2010 @ 11:35:33 AM AEST
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nice flow
cute
back n forth rhyme |
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