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better place
Contributed by
heartfelt
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Sunday, 26th October 2008 @ 02:10:49 PM in AEST
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as i look up at the sky
i wonder when i will ever die
don't be sad and please don't cry
because you couldn't say goodbye
remember i went to a better place
you know i will never forget your face
when it is time for you to come to
i will be there to welcome you
with open arms and a happy face
i will guide you to that better place
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heartfelt
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Re: better place
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by navydocny on
Sunday, 26th October 2008 @ 08:08:49 PM AEST
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Very moving..
makes me think and hope that perhaps my Nana will be there for me when it is my time...
Thank you for sharing this...
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Re: better place
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by shelby on
Sunday, 26th October 2008 @ 10:55:40 PM AEST
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A very touching write, he is watching down with a smile right now.
Hugs
Michelle |
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Re: better place
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by rebelwcause on
Monday, 27th October 2008 @ 08:02:39 PM AEST
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| touching,,,,good write |
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