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What I see...
Contributed by
lilymaemax
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Sunday, 26th October 2008 @ 06:01:12 PM in AEST
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My love for you cannot be described
It would be an injustice to even try,
But I see the good in you when others criticise.
I see you trying to make a difference
I see the honourable man
Who would not deceive or cheat just because he can.
I see the look in our girls eyes
When you walk in the door
With a kiss and a cuddle and nothing more.
I see the look in their in eyes
When they tell their day to your appropriate sighs.
I see the pleasure you get from a good book
I feel the pleasure when I'm with you and catch your fleeting look
Seventeen years of devotion you have given to me
A feeling of such contentment and security.
So thank you my love and continue to be
All you have ever been.
Copyright ©
lilymaemax
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2008-10-26 18:01:12]
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Re: What I see...
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by navydocny on
Sunday, 26th October 2008 @ 06:59:25 PM AEST
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Very beautiful and heartfelt....
To love and be loved so is such a treasure...
You've captured something very deep...
Love and gratitude are hard to describe and you've done it oh so very well....
Brilliant!
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Re: What I see...
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by Jenni_K on
Sunday, 26th October 2008 @ 09:25:51 PM AEST
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Congratulations!! After seventeen yaers it's great to see a tribute like this to your love....
Jenni |
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Re: What I see...
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by shelby on
Sunday, 26th October 2008 @ 11:03:39 PM AEST
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Bless you dear lily,
I am so happy you have this love in your life.
Thanks for sharing it with us. Many more blessing and love to you sweet lady.
Hugs
Michelle |
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Re: What I see...
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by ki on
Sunday, 26th October 2008 @ 11:31:08 PM AEST
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| how sweet!! may u continue to have such a beautiful love!! |
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Re: What I see...
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 27th October 2008 @ 08:54:16 PM AEST
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Sounds like you are two very lucky people
to have such a wonderful love.
Great write.........Mike |
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Re: What I see...
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 28th October 2008 @ 04:23:47 AM AEST
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| Loves poems are my favorite to read. I just love seeing the love in someone's heart and their sharing with the rest of us. Thank you very much for an enjoyable read and I am soooo glad to see another successful marriage!!! |
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Re: What I see...
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 2nd December 2008 @ 01:30:06 PM AEST
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| a happy poem, it made me smile. i hope the love lasts even longer than eternity. |
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Re: What I see...
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by windowguy on
Saturday, 16th May 2009 @ 10:03:24 AM AEST
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Praiseworthy write for someone special.
A heartwarming poem.Cheers. :-) |
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