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One More Chance
Contributed by
funnyface09
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Monday, 27th October 2008 @ 01:23:39 AM in AEST
Topic:
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I could never turn back the time
I wished I could
A fool, I was
My world came crashing down
When you walked out of my life
Missing you like crazy
All those months
That felt like years
Too stubborn to understand
Too late for the tears to stop
When all the endless nights
I hugged myself to sleep
Wishing for a chance
To change all this
For a chance to say I am sorry
For just one more try
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2008-10-27 01:23:39]
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Re: One More Chance
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by shelby on
Monday, 27th October 2008 @ 05:35:46 PM AEST
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oh sweety, so sad.
Endless nights I hugged myself to sleep.....
that I felt so deeply.
A lovely poem just the same and I hope that you are ok.
Hugs
Michelle |
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Re: One More Chance
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by rebelwcause on
Monday, 27th October 2008 @ 07:51:47 PM AEST
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good write thats all i can say is good write
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Re: One More Chance
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 27th October 2008 @ 08:14:54 PM AEST
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Such deep regret and sadness bleeding
in you words.
Wonderful write.........Mike |
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