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Our Nature
Contributed by
navydocny
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Tuesday, 28th October 2008 @ 09:22:04 AM in AEST
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Where lays the truest nature of man?
What sings his heart to peal through his soul?
Where is it that our pursuit had began?
What prods and burgeons us all to proal?
What is it you give for that you inquire?
Will you martyr your love, all that have given?
What scales will be shed, shunning lifes mire?
Will you acquire your hope, then wish to be forgiven?
One life, but truly how much adoration?
Ambition blinding to all that is present
Pitting time against love, such days aberration
One day may lead to an endless repent
What echoes loudest in the well of our soul?
Where will we find what makes our essence toll?
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Re: Our Nature
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by outlawpoet on
Tuesday, 28th October 2008 @ 03:13:16 PM AEST
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| great questions, great write. i hope you inspire the rest of us to maybe even if to ourselves answer these questions. thanks for the post |
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Re: Our Nature
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 29th October 2008 @ 11:09:45 PM AEST
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My dear friend,
it is in "our nature" to destroy ourselves, but perhaps with the questions you've
posed, some of us can be saved and even spared the heart ache that we all seem
to covet. I say, "covet" for it is become abundantly clear to me that having recovered
from a painful experience we jump right back in and can't wait to "get hurt" again.
(In a manner of speaking) More of us should be asking ourselves the very
questions you yourself ponder in this wonderful sonnet.
(is this becoming a habit? *winks* I hope so! :D)
~ Breezy
(who believes the sonnet is NOT dead! Not by a long shot!)
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