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Hearth
Contributed by
navydocny
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Tuesday, 28th October 2008 @ 11:03:38 AM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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Ive broken your heart and so much more
Always saddened as you walk out the door
I disappoint you and always will fail
One smile from you will fill my heart like a sail
I try too hard, so hard just to please
It makes me lose sight, of those purposeful deeds
But still Ill try, and perhaps get it right
And maybe youll dream of me some wonderful night
There is another out there that will make you contented
My longing I assure you, is no longer dissented
The only gift that I can give you and bear
To find what you want, for us to despair
If only it were me, that you were searching for
Thered be no greater love that I could ever implore
Youre a special girl and was always my dream
But now Im awake, victim to fates scheme
When I look in at you while you are asleep
Realizing what is lost, brings me to weep
Out in the cold youll find what you desire
While I sit at our hearth by our dying fire
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Re: Hearth
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by outlawpoet on
Tuesday, 28th October 2008 @ 03:01:53 PM AEST
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this is a good write man i can relate to this i been there before and you put it so well.
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Re: Hearth
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by Lilymaemax on
Wednesday, 29th October 2008 @ 03:59:40 AM AEST
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As usual brilliant heartfelt poem.There is so much longing in these words.Beautiful.
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