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A Bitter Thank You
Contributed by
catz77
on
Tuesday, 28th October 2008 @ 08:52:40 PM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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Bent and broken
By every blow and
Beaten down
With the words
Of my friends
I'm torn and tormented
With your piercing truths
You've left me
alone
Isolated in this busy
world
Screams and hatred
Won't bring my dreams back
I hope you know that you've
Killed everything that made
me who I was
.
Copyright ©
catz77
... [
2008-10-28 20:52:40]
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Re: A Bitter Thank You
(User Rating: 1 )
by outlawpoet on
Tuesday, 28th October 2008 @ 09:04:40 PM AEST
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| this is a good poem i liked it lots darlin |
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Re: A Bitter Thank You
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Saturday, 4th July 2009 @ 01:17:09 PM AEST
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The flow in this was excellent. You have mastered enjambement extremely well.
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