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Something beautiful
Contributed by
maggot
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Tuesday, 28th October 2008 @ 09:32:23 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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your mezmerising chocolate brown eyes
your lovely smile
the sweet melody of your laughter
every time i see you, eveytime i am near you...
i melt, all sense of concentration leaves
you are different from other guys...
you listen and care about what i have to say, and how i feel
if only i could ask you...
ask you how you felt
maybe then i'd know
but i can't not ask in fear of heartbreak
so i wait and that one you will come to me
but until then i have my dreams and thoughts
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2008-10-28 21:32:23]
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Re: Something beautiful
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by heartfelt on
Tuesday, 28th October 2008 @ 10:51:17 PM AEST
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| u got it. u got it bad! nice writing |
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