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im cryin
Contributed by
lostforgood
on
Thursday, 20th March 2003 @ 12:25:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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No one sees my silent tears
No one knows my deepest fears,
Im crying out but no one hears.
Thats because Im on my own,
Im sure that I have turned to stone
For I sit so cold and all alone.
Im crying here, please comfort me,
I cant take how Ive come to be.
Please, Im begging, wont you see,
The time draws near
Please, hold me dear,
Im about to face my biggest fear.
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Re: im cryin
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by Ilhar on
Thursday, 20th March 2003 @ 12:38:41 PM AEST
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very moving and emotional a good write
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Re: im cryin
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by the_temptation_of_suicide on
Thursday, 20th March 2003 @ 04:15:24 PM AEST
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| hey hun. i go through theese feelings alot, depression, suicide, self harm. this poem was beautiful and moving. if you ever want a talk just pm me. keep trying. xxx |
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Re: im cryin
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by bobotheclown on
Thursday, 20th March 2003 @ 06:02:28 PM AEST
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This was very good, very sad. I liked the rhyming this was very well written hang in there.
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Re: im cryin
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 21st March 2003 @ 06:26:01 AM AEST
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If there is anything I can do....
Beautiful poem written with feeling.
Hang in there
sleepless_siren |
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Re: im cryin
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by theangelestdevil on
Friday, 21st March 2003 @ 09:02:47 PM AEST
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| i felt this way before i understand u hang in there. like ur poem a lot |
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Re: im cryin
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by TundraHydra on
Friday, 21st March 2003 @ 09:55:48 PM AEST
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| I really got into it great write |
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