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looking down
Contributed by
black-thorn
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Wednesday, 29th October 2008 @ 01:14:58 PM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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I look down at nothing
I cry the past away
I cannot escape it
I must stay another day
I look down at emptiness
Full of darkness and despair
I clench my fists, calling out
'Why? Why is life so unfair?'
I'm looking down at you
What you used to be
And now a mound of grass and turf
My future is now behind me
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black-thorn
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2008-10-29 13:14:58]
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Re: looking down
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by navydocny on
Wednesday, 29th October 2008 @ 01:49:46 PM AEST
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Beautifully tragic....
Nothing more raw than pain of this sort...
You've painted a fine portrait of grief and anguish.....
Thanks for sharing...
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Re: looking down
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 1st November 2008 @ 09:16:48 AM AEST
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lovely vivid poem-could picture the scene!
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