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Pretty
Contributed by
outlawpoet
on
Wednesday, 29th October 2008 @ 07:24:46 PM in AEST
Topic:
didactic
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Pretty
like the leaves in the
fall
like a tree standing strong and
tall
Pretty,
like a wild irish
rose
like an icicle she has my heart
froze
Pretty
like white desert
sand
like a diamond on her
hand
Pretty
like the sunset on the beach
Pretty
but pretty much out of
reach
Copyright ©
outlawpoet
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2008-10-29 19:24:46]
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Re: Pretty
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by Jenni_K on
Wednesday, 29th October 2008 @ 07:33:10 PM AEST
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NIce format, OLP.. ..
I liked it...
Jenni |
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Re: Pretty
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by catz77 on
Wednesday, 29th October 2008 @ 07:35:54 PM AEST
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| I like it. I didn't notice it rhymed, really. But I like these sort of poems. they read some what broken but it ties up in the end. |
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Re: Pretty
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by tswilkins on
Wednesday, 29th October 2008 @ 07:46:56 PM AEST
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| The first thought that comes to mind is that it has nice images. "Pretty like white desert sand" is my favorite. So, is this your usual style? If not, what made this particular style come to mind? |
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Re: Pretty
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by heartfelt on
Wednesday, 29th October 2008 @ 09:08:11 PM AEST
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| different. i think its unique. keep it coming! |
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Re: Pretty
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by Robert_Edgar_Burns on
Wednesday, 29th October 2008 @ 11:13:46 PM AEST
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My baby girl, while still in the crib, could be made to smile
and stop crying when her daddy simply said one word : "Pretty!"
This poem brought back those sweet long ago memories. Thanks.
Blessings,
Robert Edgar "Lawdog" Burns |
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Re: Pretty
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 29th October 2008 @ 11:59:27 PM AEST
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I loved the format style all of it.
It is pretty!!
Everything you spoke of here spells pretty to me.
Whoever you wrote this about or for is a lucky lady my sweet friend.
Huggers from AZ
Michelle |
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Re: Pretty
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by black-thorn on
Thursday, 30th October 2008 @ 08:57:34 AM AEST
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i loved the style used.
the imagery is brilliant
thanks
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Re: Pretty
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by Ambivalence on
Thursday, 30th October 2008 @ 09:56:36 PM AEST
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a pretty poem indeed. u painted beautiful similes for the subject u speak warmly of. dont giv ur hopes up too easily (sorta contradictory made by a pessimist like me). take care
-K.Z. |
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Re: Pretty
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by karoody on
Friday, 31st October 2008 @ 12:09:37 AM AEST
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This was great! It flowed very nicely I thought. I enjoyed this one very much...
love smiles blessings
kara |
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Re: Pretty
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by fanniesson on
Wednesday, 21st January 2009 @ 09:17:34 AM AEST
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must say your ending did catch me off guard
nice write here held up to the end
and then bam!
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