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To the Sky
Contributed by
joelmuses
on
Wednesday, 29th October 2008 @ 09:19:15 PM in AEST
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How I wish I could quit, and leave
that which bereaves
the fickle flecks of folly. Here, they lie
in stone, set in
stone, set in
time.
How nice to be dry, and wave
to the patience I gave
you, flighty trick of candle. Light, it waves
and you wash out
in waves, nothing
grows.
How but once did I call, and strike
all the dowry of
your seething faade. There, you see
it worn, to be
torn, never
worn.
How repetitive it grows more
repetitive, each
time I inhale the sighs. Still, it is
water over the
dam. Damn the
water, its
over.
How I wish I could quit, and leave
frivolities. Believe
the holy dark of night. There, it sinks
in the sky, to
the sky, lost in
time.
Copyright ©
joelmuses
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2008-10-29 21:19:15]
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Re: To the Sky
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by outlawpoet on
Wednesday, 29th October 2008 @ 09:50:41 PM AEST
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| well since nobody else is gonna coment on this i am. even if all i can say is great write then thats all ill say... |
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Re: To the Sky
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by black-thorn on
Thursday, 30th October 2008 @ 08:52:05 AM AEST
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i really like this.
i think you've conveyed your feelings very well.
thanks
sarah |
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Re: To the Sky
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by karoody on
Friday, 31st October 2008 @ 10:22:30 AM AEST
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Very creatively done. A very unique way of getting your point across. I liked this. I will definitely read more from you.
Thank you
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