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In the Dark Room
Contributed by
TundraHydra
on
Thursday, 20th March 2003 @ 01:45:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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In a dark room the blood flows freely
Blacker than the darkest night
The tainted air swirls gently around the ground
The slight breeze through a crack bring relief from the racid odor
Sharp, keen eyes watch a figure kneeling
The rats chitter at the smell of fresh life
They flee at the sob coming from the fragile person
She cries for all who she knows her actions will hurt
Standing with blood dripping from the wrists
Fingers curled tightly into a fist
Stepping onto the empty bottle of pain killers
She screams until her throat is raw
And continues on with a raspy screech
But noone is around to hear her cries
Stumbling she falls and knocks the silent phone off the hook
She had brought it here in hopes of someone calling
Someone caring about her life
The pain slowly comes back as the asprin wears off
Before she blacks out there comes a click
Light floods the floor, an "Oh my God" sounds
She sees no more but still listens
A hand holds hers and tears drip onto her face
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"You think she'll make it?"
"I dont know, it's not my place. Only time can tell. Just be a friend and help her through this hell."
Copyright ©
TundraHydra
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2003-03-20 13:45:00]
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Re: In the Dark Room
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by wyrd_faerie on
Thursday, 20th March 2003 @ 02:45:54 PM AEST
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| this is so sad...if you ever need anyone to talk to, feel free to pm me... |
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Re: In the Dark Room
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 21st March 2003 @ 06:36:52 AM AEST
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I literally went cold when I read this (honest truth). It is one of the best poems I have read on this site.
WOW!!
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Re: In the Dark Room
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by lostforgood on
Friday, 21st March 2003 @ 10:34:45 AM AEST
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your gift to write is very apparent, i bet you are a very precious person, if you get a chance read some of my poems i will value your opinion a lot if you ever need anything send a message my way :)
~lost~ |
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Re: In the Dark Room
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by etherealgurl on
Wednesday, 28th May 2003 @ 05:49:19 PM AEST
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| chilling, honest and gut wrenching.....the stuff the best poetry is made of....I hope the leading character is not you...if it is and you ever need to talk, look me up. |
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