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Perceptions
Contributed by
NoSaint
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Friday, 31st October 2008 @ 09:19:48 AM in AEST
Topic:
Haiku
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Depression
Teardrops fall like rain
Desperation her souls song
Lost in yesterdays
Manic
Flitting here and there
Agitations manic phase
Broken lost in haze
Schizophrenia
Voices calling me
No one else seems to hear them
Stop them if you please
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NoSaint
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2008-10-31 09:19:48]
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Re: Perceptions
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by Voice of the Silent on
Friday, 31st October 2008 @ 09:27:07 AM AEST
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Very good I don't see this kind of poetry often and your very good at it
Voices may be calling
Your sanity may be falling
But at least you have someone to talk to
All those voices calling
just listen they have good ideas to
-kelly |
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Re: Perceptions
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by karoody on
Friday, 31st October 2008 @ 09:35:01 AM AEST
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Shari,
You wrote this very creatively! I like the way you tied these together. It's very sad that some people have to live like this. At least your understanding heart will makes it easier on the ones you can touch...
Love you
Kara |
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Re: Perceptions
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by navydocny on
Friday, 31st October 2008 @ 01:26:23 PM AEST
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Love this Totem of Madness....
They all tie together oh so well...
Brilliant and unique construct!
Steve |
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Re: Perceptions
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 31st October 2008 @ 03:20:42 PM AEST
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| I think they are all great, but especially think much of the first one. |
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Re: Perceptions
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by Crow on
Friday, 31st October 2008 @ 07:24:32 PM AEST
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| this is a little different than your normal poetry, I like it..Lane |
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Re: Perceptions
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by Recyclebin on
Saturday, 1st November 2008 @ 12:16:27 PM AEST
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Shari, this was an excellent piece.
Stunning and brilliant.
*Nods*
~Bin~ |
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