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The Window
Contributed by
Recyclebin
on
Saturday, 1st November 2008 @ 01:07:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
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The outside to the inside isnt in sync
When I start using this pen an ink.
Its not easy to know
Youre not wanted
I hear whispers coming from the window.
Its not easy to flow out our problems
Its not easy to listen to the sounds..
Oh my god its so tough to stand here
And watch one persons life disappear.
Its all the same, deep down inside of you.
Everything moving away, so moving to conform to.
(Numbing) I long to feel the breeze.
to once again caress my skin.
I want to once again feel
What it is I truly believe in.
Im losing my most inner qualities
screaming silently,.. someone please save me
Im having a meltdown, why cant you see?
Its so tough on you and I
Its so tough that you must watch me die,
In pen and ink, so slowly is this death,
every single day a struggle for one more breath.
Life is the same, sanity so tough to deliver
Just trying not to drown in Isolations River.
Its all about whats driving inside of you,
Opening the window ,calling for me..
whispers I hear.I push through.
(Tears streaming)... I cant remember the last
Time, that I took to dream.
Closing my watered eyes
Searching for any source of light beam.
Taking a breath (Sighs).. Searching for the courage
To make the first move
Thinking of all the little things
That made me feel alive, just something to prove.
My sadness... is in every piece, and my soul
Is wore so very thin.
Im falling, how oddly now... I feel peace,
I can feel the breeze once again caressing my skin.
Copyright ©
Recyclebin
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2008-11-01 01:07:00]
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Re: The Window
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by emystar on
Saturday, 1st November 2008 @ 02:20:39 AM AEST
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Wow friend, you sho Recyclebin this powerfull, healing, write .
I can feel the power behind it in every word, every line.
You sho are on fire!
Luv it.
huggs, blessings,
emy |
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Re: The Window
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by karoody on
Saturday, 1st November 2008 @ 02:38:03 PM AEST
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Bin~
I still can't read this one without the waterworks!
You did a wonderful job here.
I cannot say that enough.
This is one of my favorites from you.
Huge hugs
Kara |
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Re: The Window
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by catz77 on
Saturday, 1st November 2008 @ 10:21:03 PM AEST
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Awesome write.
Very powerful. |
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Re: The Window
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by Butterflyperfect on
Saturday, 1st November 2008 @ 11:45:51 PM AEST
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I read this and I don't know what to say. It is a wonderful piece with so much power behind it. I can relate to some of the words in your poem, so in a way you have helped me heal a little to. Thank you for that... I needed it.
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Re: The Window
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by Jenni_K on
Sunday, 2nd November 2008 @ 08:12:55 PM AEST
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Deeply touching...well done..
Jenni |
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