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Penetration
Contributed by
jyssvw22
on
Saturday, 1st November 2008 @ 01:44:33 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Nothing is wrong
Still this all smells of guilt
Repugnant and remorseful
Untruthful from the start
Lies compounded
Lives rerouted
Togetherness remains elusive
Actions personified conclusive
An image of smiles and sunny days
A privilege to have been holding your face
In mine
In time
Give it away
Summer days
Over and gone
Sleeping naked
We have nothing on
Slow caresses
Leading me on
Turning you on
Sliding through
Nothing new
The feeling of being touched by heaven
or the likes of you
Could not hold on
Would not be wrong
Sliced in equal argumentative undertones
Equidistant from a metaphorical microphone
Speak up
Seek up
You can keep knocking, but no one is home
Enter in unison
Come in harmony
A cacophony
Averted
Body inverted
Upside down
On your knees
Inside out
Dont forget to breathe
You dont get to leave
Not until
Im waiting still
Keeping still
Who can blame you
Who can love you
Who has played you
How have you played
Fairly
Squarely
Barely
I accept the blame
I know why I came
To grow into something of which I am not ashamed
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jyssvw22
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2008-11-01 13:44:33]
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Re: Penetration
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by hauntedscorp on
Saturday, 24th July 2010 @ 12:50:58 PM AEST
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| This reads like an open letter to life, with a guilty finger pointed straight back at you. I am still in awe at your 'barely there' technique of half expressed thoughts bursting with emotion. Amazing. |
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