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Seldom I cry
Contributed by
Machlath
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Sunday, 2nd November 2008 @ 06:54:38 PM in AEST
Topic:
secrets
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Down on my knees,
I repent the fact that I haven't said what I meant to say.
I had to say to thee that upon your grave I will cry.
Eternal words won't reveal what I want to be revealed.
The blood will fall on dead eyes
for it was and is a lie.
Because seldom I cry.
Copyright ©
Machlath
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2008-11-02 18:54:38]
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Re: Seldom I cry
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by shelby on
Sunday, 2nd November 2008 @ 11:00:08 PM AEST
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A heart felt write, welcome to ypdc.
Hugs
Michelle |
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Re: Seldom I cry
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by The_Unknown on
Monday, 3rd November 2008 @ 02:46:36 AM AEST
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I love it.. It's very good.
:) hope to see more! |
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Re: Seldom I cry
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by karoody on
Monday, 3rd November 2008 @ 06:48:09 AM AEST
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Welcome, friend!
I hope you enjoy being a member here.
I enjoyed this write very much and look forward to more from you...
Thank you
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Kara |
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Re: Seldom I cry
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by Machlath on
Monday, 3rd November 2008 @ 04:26:47 PM AEST
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Thanks guys!
There are A LOT more coming, I just don't want to bomb you with them...:)
All I want is a Lil of opinion, since I never really showed them to anyone...
so there you go-criticism is accepted very much too-just don't get too carried away with it :) |
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Re: Seldom I cry
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by little_genna on
Monday, 3rd November 2008 @ 04:51:48 PM AEST
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Welcome!!!!!!
this is a real good write. the flowed was nice and as for the content, definitely heart felt. maybe im more sensitive today but it made me want to cry.
thank you for finally sharing with all of us!
Gen xx |
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Re: Seldom I cry
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 5th November 2008 @ 07:17:18 AM AEST
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Though short, it carries deep feelings
Very well written............Mike |
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