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One more Excuse
Contributed by
Recyclebin
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Monday, 3rd November 2008 @ 01:51:11 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I cant wait for the day
When I have the courage to breakaway...
Im so tired, so worn, so shattered
I just dont have much to say.
Im sorryI do not have the strength to carry on.
I hate fighting, I hate hating you,
I hate knowing I couldnt have won.
But I know I should go
Do you have any idea what Im talking about?
What is it you desire to know?
Do you want to know, how I really feel?
How you hurt me? Should I tell you, that
Youre like, a thief in the night who steals
That your coldness towards me
is like a bitter winter storm
All I ever wanted was to be held
close, to fever and be warmed
Do you even care about any of the
small things that are running through me?
I didnt think so; its always been about you.
You are blind, and you will never see
You will never feel my love, for you have amputated my desire.
You will never know the true me,
for you have shredded my heart with sharp twisting barbwire.
And you wonder why... at times I seem so far away.
Its because Im dying,
Its devastating watching my spiritual side decay.
I just want to know Im alive.
I just want someone to pound on my heart,
I want to be electrified, just wanting to be revived.
But I just sit here and take your abuse.
Each and every day, I make believe that you love me.
Giving me purpose... to withstand one more day.
Giving me a reason to make just one more excuse..
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Recyclebin
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2008-11-03 01:51:11]
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Re: One more Excuse
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by karoody on
Monday, 3rd November 2008 @ 05:38:22 AM AEST
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ouch, seriously.
if i could take your hurting away i would,
i know how these moments feel.
i wish i had the power to brighten your skies...
huge hugs
love smiles blessings
kara |
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Re: One more Excuse
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by weepingXxwillows on
Monday, 3rd November 2008 @ 10:59:36 AM AEST
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| Simply Amazing work! Very descriptive, you made me feel like I was watching the character (whether this poem was about yourself or made up) from far away. I felt pity for you, and I was angered at the person who was at fault for the pain. Like I said an amazing poem. |
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Re: One more Excuse
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by Crow on
Monday, 3rd November 2008 @ 07:37:31 PM AEST
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Bin...this is the first time i`ve commented on your work, my god man" you must have taken a page from my life at one time. if you ever want to talk, I`m willing. that portion of my life beat me to an inch of my life, heart, mind and spirit, stolen from me if I tried to rise"..I found every dark corner there was to hide, you might know what i`m talking about.
"I hate knowing I couldn’t have won"
that is what cuts to the bone in this write. peace...Lane
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Re: One more Excuse
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by Jenni_K on
Monday, 3rd November 2008 @ 09:04:57 PM AEST
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A very heart breaking write, my friend.. Your pain is quite evident. If you want to talk, I am just a click away...
Hugs
Miss Jenni |
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