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Love's Autumn
Contributed by
navydocny
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Friday, 7th November 2008 @ 08:13:13 AM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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Warm sunrays, against our loves autumn crisping chill
Fallen leaves, once infused with so much earthly life
When color faded none, such as my love and goodwill
The frost of such days, deny hearts filled with loves rife
As with some seasons past, yet another is unyielding
Nothing to harvest, as there is none left to reap
But cold unfilled nights, and vacant thoughts wielding
Pleasant of memories, that invade our nights sleep
Spring shall be reborn, after the harsh winters reign
Songbirds in my heart, will still be singing your loveliness
Will your heart sing its song true, or will it abstain
And surrender its love, to an inestimable abjectedness
Seasons circle surrounds all hearts, live and proper
With love between two, the twos world shall prosper
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2008-11-07 08:13:13]
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Re: Love's Autumn
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by emystar on
Friday, 7th November 2008 @ 10:32:18 AM AEST
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Incrdible write. Very creative thinking and writing.
huggs,
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Re: Love's Autumn
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by Jenni_K on
Friday, 7th November 2008 @ 04:26:28 PM AEST
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Amazing write, Steve.... I love the analogy..
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Re: Love's Autumn
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by myheartsvoice on
Tuesday, 11th November 2008 @ 03:51:15 PM AEST
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Very beautiful, i love autumn
my favorite season, i'm from
new england, nothing like it,
very viivid, as well as a nice
style of writing. good luck to
you . . .
ty likewise 4 your read and
comment on my poem . . .
Ben . . .
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Re: Love's Autumn
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 15th November 2008 @ 01:25:54 PM AEST
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Wow, Steve, this is excruciatingly lovely. I adore the metaphor of love
being like the seasons. And you have written this so well. There is such a comfort
in reading this. I can't even begin to express how it has touched me.
Hope you are keeping well, all things considered. As always, praying for you ~
~ Breezy
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