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wonder
Contributed by
Brooklyn
on
Sunday, 9th November 2008 @ 12:44:43 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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In his eyes
are the only way to be
in my heart i cant see
why im here or
why hes so dear
if i had the power to read his mind
maybe i would have a better since of
why hes the only thing i can think of
why hes the thing i want the most
why i cant sleep at night
but in my heart i already kno
that he will never love me
that he will never see me
and why he would even want to
so as i type this maybe
he might see and then wonder
if this is me
Copyright ©
Brooklyn
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2008-11-09 12:44:43]
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Re: wonder
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by navydocny on
Monday, 10th November 2008 @ 11:53:34 AM AEST
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There is a visceral level of want here.....
This almost evokes a sweat.....
Very rhythmatic in its emotion...
(everyone should be wanted like this!)
Great job, keep it up!
Steve |
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