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Where is my Heaven???
Contributed by
Recyclebin
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Tuesday, 11th November 2008 @ 09:50:14 PM in AEST
Topic:
spiritual
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Wondering as I gaze at the heavens that surround me.
I can see the Milky Way and my mind begins to ponder.
In the Milky Way there is a yellow star.
And around this yellow star is planet Earth.
And circling this planet Earth is the Moon.
The Moon then pulls at the Sea.
The sea then guides the tide.
And then the tide runs toward the shore.
The shore then leads to ground.
And the ground bounds the mountain
and the mountain cradles the meadow.
On this meadow is a single rooted tree,
Leaning against the tree is a person named me.
And inside a person named me is my heart.
In my heart is thing called love.
And my love is a much higher power.
And inside my higher power is my heaven
So answering my own question....
Heaven must be all around me.............
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Re: Where is my Heaven???
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 12th November 2008 @ 01:42:49 AM AEST
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Oh my,
you welled my eyes up with tears on this one.
You weaved such a poetic master here.
Capturing the essence of everything right and beautiful. You are so right, Heaven must be all around! I can see you in nature near that tree! I loved this. Thanks for this poem, it wrapped round my heart my friend. Beautiful!
Hugs
Michelle |
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Re: Where is my Heaven???
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 18th November 2008 @ 05:24:07 AM AEST
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Well your thinking makes for some great writing.
I thought thinking too much is what makes us writers.
Awesome.
Big huggs, smiles, blessings,
emy
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Re: Where is my Heaven???
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by karoody on
Monday, 15th December 2008 @ 03:50:15 AM AEST
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amazingly beautiful write
to know such beauty
not enough people in this world take the time to witness it.
happy to find it in your heart
hugs smiles blessings to you
always
kara |
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