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Pip
Contributed by
plainfreshrain
on
Saturday, 15th November 2008 @ 05:26:09 PM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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talking to the horses
she directs them to the river bed
bites an apple head
and tosses it aside
her wild heart
wanted to catch thorns on her flesh
wanted to fall in the wet grass
and have her heart caressed
by passing mermen
who had fled the ocean
in search of quiet vacation
to them she said:
under the leaning bridge
please kiss me
and when you go away
do miss me
and when more time has gone by than you can stand
and when the river bed runs dry
do not suffer, do not cry
you never loved me
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2008-11-15 17:26:09]
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Re: Pip
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 16th November 2008 @ 11:20:56 AM AEST
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This poem is layered with fantastical abstract verse that is delicious and wonderful! I love your imagery. Keep writing I am enjoying your work.
BRAVO!
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Re: Pip
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by Fionndruinne on
Monday, 17th November 2008 @ 12:36:37 AM AEST
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Such a vivid, winning quality to this piece, I can't even understand why. Maybe it just stirs the yearning. It does it well. Bravo!
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Re: Pip
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by laststarontheleft on
Friday, 12th March 2010 @ 09:14:04 AM AEST
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Wonderfully imaginative!
I love the way you have created such a memorable moment, and then painted it
very much in it's true light - as it would be for real.
Superb writing here, I loved it!
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