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Downstream (Song)
Contributed by
Feelin_Like_A_SadFellow
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Friday, 21st March 2003 @ 02:45:00 AM in AEST
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Downstream
The peaceful sound, of a gentle river
Flowing easily downstream
Makes me wonder, how a little further down
Can turn the softest sound, into a roaring thunder
The silky white clouds above
Dance across the soft blue sky
And I watch, as a dove, is about to get lost
In the dark gray clouds about to arrive
Chorus
I just dont know where this world is going, anymore
When will all the other people, just open their eyes
And look at whats right in front of them
When will the sun shine down on us
So we can live in the light of our time, and step away
From our shadows
Walking through the streets, you can see people
Arent as nice as they can be
Its like looking for a rose in a garden of weeds
Finding someone who shows a little hospitality
Chorus
Passing by the rapids, after the falls
Looking past all the roughs of the stream
You can hear the once familiar sound of the
River flowing, passing by, softly, slowly
To the gentle sound of the dove in its home
In the nest of a tree, far away from the dark clouds
Guitar Solo
Chorus
Will I be able to find some hospitality
Will I find some friendly faces
Will I find that rose in the garden of weeds
If I go a little further downstream
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2003-03-21 02:45:00]
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Re: Downstream (Song)
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 21st March 2003 @ 10:17:26 AM AEST
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I read the poem and loved it. I wish I could hear it being sung. I am sure it would be beautiful.
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Re: Downstream (Song)
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by wyrd_faerie on
Sunday, 23rd March 2003 @ 03:36:53 PM AEST
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| i love this... |
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Re: Downstream (Song)
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by wolfflow on
Sunday, 30th March 2003 @ 11:48:37 AM AEST
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| there's a really nice feel to this |
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Re: Downstream (Song)
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by karoody on
Monday, 31st March 2003 @ 10:01:57 AM AEST
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Wow! I loved both song and poem. You draw a great picture with your words. You also pose a good question-I hope we can find a rose within all these weeds. Take care.
Kara |
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Re: Downstream (Song)
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by LOWMAN613 on
Monday, 31st March 2003 @ 05:45:31 PM AEST
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| Both song & poem are well done,just beautiful! Christina |
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