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Memory
Contributed by
ktbugg
on
Friday, 21st March 2003 @ 05:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I woke to the reality
That my reality is a dream
And I couldnt help but see
That its not all as it may seem
I stood up from my bed
As sun beams showered over my face
Its the only warmth I have left
Since the loss of your embrace
I tried to get my mind
Out of the everlasting trance
But you parade around
In a hypnotic
Never-ending dance
Im getting over you
With speed as a turtle crossing the sea
Continuing at this rate
Your memory will never let me free
Copyright ©
ktbugg
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2003-03-21 05:35:00]
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Re: Memory
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 21st March 2003 @ 10:50:01 AM AEST
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What a fantastic poem. Really good. :)))
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Re: Memory
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by Ilhar on
Friday, 21st March 2003 @ 02:14:44 PM AEST
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very good poem..i enjoyed it...and unfortunately could relate to it.
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Re: Memory
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by bobotheclown on
Saturday, 22nd March 2003 @ 08:55:48 PM AEST
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A great poem lots of fantastic imagery I must say I can relate to this a lot. Those first 2 lines were really brilliant. Keep on writing Katie!
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Re: Memory
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by ThirtyDays on
Sunday, 23rd March 2003 @ 03:27:56 AM AEST
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Ahhh... why does the mind insist on racing .. yet the heart seems to trudge along?
You'll never forget, you just won't think about it as much.
Peace to you. |
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