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Doubloons
Contributed by
ramfire
on
Saturday, 29th November 2008 @ 09:15:37 AM in AEST
Topic:
secrets
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If ever you walk Saint de Vales sand beach
and see the seagulls winging low the waves,
or feel the rushing cold surf break and reach
your feet then youll smell ginger close to caves.
Cliffs hold back surging waters white with foam
their whitecap spay eer hiding caves large holes,
where pirate Jean La Feet hid gold in dome
within the maze thats taken many souls.
La Feet had plundered wide the Spanish Main
his treasures placed in secret chamber place,
and woe comes yea to those who seek in vain
to find the passage holding old coins case.
The beach is pleasant walking every day.
Think nay to enter gold coins water way.
Copyright ©
ramfire
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2008-11-29 09:15:37]
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Re: Doubloons
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 29th November 2008 @ 07:17:59 PM AEST
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This is terrific! An thrilling introduction to those of us who do not know of this place. Like Frost did so many times you make us crave the experience of what you (the poet) sees so that we have hear your words in our head as we are revealed to this beauty.
A masterful job!
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