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That Day
Contributed by
sinned
on
Saturday, 29th November 2008 @ 11:11:50 PM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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Never thought I'd ever loose
You
I loved you true
Still i do
Its been said
Get her out of your head
My mother just dead
Love led me to bed
Sadden
Gladden
I'm home again
My love will win
Forever forever
My love my lover
Forever forever
Can I forget Never
A beautiful good bye
I love you I sigh
I never knew why
Your way of saying God I could die
I believed other wise
Now and forever
Now and forever
God I could die
All most seventy children dear
Was that the year
I've had my days wallowed in tears
Depression my bed another year
How could one be so dumb
Travel to a different drum
We'll both live a lot longer
Each day you I hunger
Never bitter I wish you well
Living longer in my hell
My God I hear no bell
That day I lost my soul
If my prayers be heard
I'm so absurd
My love so true
Each day I love you
I see you and look away.
Ever my mind cannot forget that day. I took another wife forever pray.
What has happen I cannot say.
Children my children
Am I forbidden
As dad I felt a good one
My daughter my sons
Cupid you were always there
I wonder and blankly stare
Annie little girls love their daddies
My mind sees my babies
For better for worst
Cursed
That day my body to dust
For I love you not lust
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2008-11-29 23:11:50]
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Re: That Day
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by emystar on
Sunday, 30th November 2008 @ 12:44:57 AM AEST
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Definently had my attention from first line to the last.
Awesome writing, my friend!
Huggs, blessings,
emy |
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Re: That Day
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 30th November 2008 @ 07:13:55 AM AEST
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Wow, you truly captured anguish well here. There is a screaming pain
that blinds the eyes and the way you've placed muddled thoughts, mirrors
how real life feels when we go through a difficult time. Sometimes we
don't know which way is up, you know? This was excellent. I hope it
helped to write it out ...
~ Breezy
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Re: That Day
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 1st December 2008 @ 06:22:53 PM AEST
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beautiful expression of feelings,
hugs n' love nessa |
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