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maybe
Contributed by
freakofnature
on
Friday, 21st March 2003 @ 08:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
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I watch the people and I am smug
They run about like poisened bugs
They bleed insanity through open wounds
I seal my thoughts, won't be consumed
Hide inside my homemade reality
Salvation's accident was a fatality
The words all ryme running in my mind
Writing,thinking all the time
My life is on paper,it looks so bland
Want to be Barbie, cute and tan
But Barbie has a vacant head
Ignorance is bliss until you're dead
My bubble grows smaller every day
Guess I have to go ut and play
But I won't play unless the game is mine
Watch out bugs, I'm feeling fine.
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freakofnature
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2003-03-21 08:35:00]
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Re: maybe
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by karoody on
Friday, 21st March 2003 @ 09:57:42 AM AEST
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| i like this! the perfestion of barbie is fake. the imperfections of us is what makes us loved... |
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Re: maybe
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by karoody on
Friday, 21st March 2003 @ 09:58:10 AM AEST
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perfection*
sorry... |
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Re: maybe
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 21st March 2003 @ 10:57:17 AM AEST
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Absolutely terrific poem. I love it. Keep up the great work. I wanna read more!!
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Re: maybe
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by shelby on
Friday, 21st March 2003 @ 12:07:26 PM AEST
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Ahhhh this is adorable!! I love this!! I too wish I had Barbie dimensions, lol. I dont want her vacant head thought, hee hee. Ok now being serious.
This is a wonderful poem. Thankyou for sharing.
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Re: maybe
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by Ilhar on
Friday, 21st March 2003 @ 01:53:29 PM AEST
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good poem i enjoyed it very much..keep them coming
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Re: maybe
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by mystical_illusion on
Friday, 21st March 2003 @ 06:25:39 PM AEST
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Well freakofnature, I really liked you poem very original and creative which always makes it good.
Good job,
-kelly
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