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Ghosts
Contributed by
MrSelfDistruct
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Monday, 1st December 2008 @ 10:41:35 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I'm stuck in this 'whole' with all my worst fears,
And all the words I've said, have fallen upon deaf ears.
Beyond this place that I've been calling home,
I find myself lost, confused, and very alone.
The smiles I've seen were fake, and full of decay
And I know, I feel the same ... In a way.
I see things that I know they cant see,
and it that kills me the most,
They pass through them, but haunt me,
Ghosts.
Copyright ©
MrSelfDistruct
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2008-12-01 22:41:35]
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Re: Ghosts
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 2nd December 2008 @ 01:25:29 AM AEST
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You really said much in a small write. Powerful and gripping. Those darn ghosts huh??
May you sleep well without their company this night my friend.
Awesome work
Huggers
Michelle |
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Re: Ghosts
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by treadingshallowfire on
Tuesday, 2nd December 2008 @ 03:36:39 AM AEST
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| nice work bro |
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Re: Ghosts
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by snoopington on
Tuesday, 2nd December 2008 @ 08:12:05 AM AEST
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great write sort and sweet love the flow..keep them coming.looking forward to reading more.
m.......... |
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Re: Ghosts
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 2nd December 2008 @ 08:24:45 AM AEST
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| short but sweet. good job. |
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