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wait for me
Contributed by
treadingshallowfire
on
Tuesday, 2nd December 2008 @ 03:25:20 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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a seed of love thats nurtured gets stronger as it grows a love thats unattended will wither like a rose time will spoil everything but steady as it flows can a love hide forever heaven only knows a thousand days a thousand nights a thousand rain drops from my eyes stare at heaven as i cry will she wait for me a hundred nights i lay asleep searching for you in my dreams a hundred days i then awake just to search another day hold on babe im on my way we were meant to be a million stars in the sky a million seeds needing earth another million reasons why my dreams lead me to her shadows gloom has reached its peak im loser her i can not sleep without her love i cannot breathe dont give up on me however long this may take an endless love is on its way ill see you when where both awake lying next to me
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Re: wait for me
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 2nd December 2008 @ 08:18:31 AM AEST (User
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it has a nice lyrical quality to it, you have got the rhyme just right. keep it up! |
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Re: wait for me
(User Rating: 1 ) by shelby on
Wednesday, 3rd December 2008 @ 12:47:27 AM AEST (User
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I agree with Phill it is very lyrical and pretty I love it.
A million stars a million seeds.........(nice)
Entire write is simply beautiful.
Welcome to YPDC
Michelle |
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Re: wait for me
(User Rating: 1 ) by Puppy on
Wednesday, 3rd December 2008 @ 03:47:30 AM AEST (User
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that was an amazing poem! it was so beautiful.... well done....
Puppy :) |
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