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The Heavens:
Contributed by
richard_campbell
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Tuesday, 2nd December 2008 @ 08:40:59 AM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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The Heavens are alive and watching,
recording are every move.
The stars are large and dieing ,
in reality am confuse.
New ones are born just like us everyday.
In second,minutes and hours
days,months and years.
Time keeps our records,
our progress,joy and fears.
Copyright ©
richard_campbell
... [
2008-12-02 08:40:59]
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Re: The Heavens:
(User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on
Tuesday, 2nd December 2008 @ 07:31:06 PM AEST
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Well now, my long time friend. I always read your work and even vote but it's the holidays so what the heck I'm commenting.
This is my favorite of your writes.
It's a masterpeice 'cause most folks have the same thoughts and feelings at times.
Now I have a bone to pick with you. I luv comments too and if you comment my work, I'll return the favor.
U Know you know I wuzs ya.
Blessings, huggs, Arkansas smiles, Happy, Happy holidays,
emy
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Re: The Heavens:
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by Balmain_Tiger on
Wednesday, 3rd December 2008 @ 06:36:58 AM AEST
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| Yes, someone is watching and noting, even if it is only you. |
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