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Fraught
Contributed by
Balmain_Tiger
on
Wednesday, 3rd December 2008 @ 06:17:32 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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I have nothing in my heart
Nay a place for me to start
Lonely, angry empty pain
All my hope unruly slain
Darkness growth has begun
Keeping out the daily sun
Foul air full of murk
Only evil a place to perk
A depth my soul has never seen
A place my heart has never been
A place for hatred and despair
With a distant lonely stare
Fingertips clawed with blood
Every effort a swimming flood
To the bones if I must
There is only you I can trust
Wednesday, 3 December 2008
11:00:17 PM
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Re: Fraught
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 3rd December 2008 @ 07:21:09 AM AEST
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wow, This is really good writng.
I can relate to much of it.
One person you can trust is a great start.
Huggs, smiles, blessings,
emy |
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Re: Fraught
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by Balmain_Tiger on
Wednesday, 3rd December 2008 @ 08:00:39 AM AEST
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These following words introduce my poem. My poem was inspired by a lady I call my Muse,
My Dear Muse
I felt despair in your voice
Hidden away behind choice
Though a smile did come through
This feeling resonated true
So these words I did write
With hope to shed some light
For the joy your voice brings
A happy sound that really sings
Thursday, 4 December 2008
12:34:45 AM
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Re: Fraught
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by snoopington on
Wednesday, 3rd December 2008 @ 10:32:13 AM AEST
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really liked this very emotional piece
m............ |
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Re: Fraught
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by Loende on
Wednesday, 3rd December 2008 @ 03:57:04 PM AEST
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It's so hard when you think that there is no hope. This is an angst filled poem that really resonates with me. Thank you for sharing it and great job!
Be well,
Loende |
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Re: Fraught
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 3rd December 2008 @ 04:38:16 PM AEST
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| very very dark but very very good. some wonderful language in there, especially in the second stanza. |
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