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Love = Death
Contributed by
poetking123
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Thursday, 4th December 2008 @ 06:38:47 PM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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I was sitting under my tree waiting for her,just thinking will she like my coat of fur.maybe she likes animals.Crap i got to take this off but what if i ask the wrong thing maybe she'll give me a slap.Hi.I here out of the open then i look into her eyes and see there as blue as the night time sky her hair the color of caramel chocolate with her red shirt just makes me wish i was a better flirt.hi i replied with a big grin on my face .look h'm sorry but we gotta stop this relationship were not in pace.then she left and saw tears I'm my eyes the first thing that came in my mind was i want to die.so i left the tree and went to the nearest hospital and attached a note to my chest saying sorry for being so fatal.then i got to the front door and shot the bullet the size of a dart and thought of the girl who put ripped apart my heart............
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Re: Love = Death
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by navydocny on
Thursday, 4th December 2008 @ 07:23:02 PM AEST
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Tragic indeed....
good job on capturing a feeling here....
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