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Find Something Burning
Contributed by
daniella
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Friday, 5th December 2008 @ 04:21:22 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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I was scared of seeing fireflies in the dark
Flickering spontaneously against the blackness of the trees
Tilting my head, to hear the sound of the lark
Standing up
Brushing off
The dirt and leaves from my knees
And with our lips, we find something burning
We find something burning
We find something burning
And with our mouths, we put out the flame
And place all the blame
On anyone else but us
Anyone else but us
And there was a dawning come spreading
Over the river
And you leaned up against the bark
and shivered
And I knew you'd pull the briars
From my hair
I turned my head to the sky and all I saw was haze
Hovering there
Like snow in eyelashes, you're caught in my sight
Like snow in eyelashes, you're caught in my sight
Copyright ©
daniella
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2008-12-05 16:21:22]
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Re: Find Something Burning
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 6th December 2008 @ 05:57:05 PM AEST
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there's some interesting imagery here. something a little different, and we always need that. good job.
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Re: Find Something Burning
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by snoopington on
Monday, 8th December 2008 @ 06:03:48 AM AEST
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great write really like your flow
good job.......
all the best.......
m............ |
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