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The Edge
Contributed by
SadPoet101
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Friday, 5th December 2008 @ 09:04:37 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I'm standing here at the edge of the clif
You took me so far
But then you left
Running away
Leaving me there by myself
You didn't know how much I needed you
You didn't understand that I couldn't go on without you
So I didn't
I turned around and walked back to that edge
The same edge you had found me at
But you won't be there to keep me from falling this time
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2008-12-05 21:04:37]
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Re: The Edge
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 6th December 2008 @ 03:48:05 PM AEST
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i like how you used the metaphor of going over the edge to its full effect. i think it worked quite well. good effort.
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Re: The Edge
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by 143 on
Sunday, 7th December 2008 @ 10:19:45 AM AEST
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| Very Good Poem!! |
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