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....Love Lingers On & On....
Contributed by
eternalsunshine
on
Friday, 5th December 2008 @ 11:10:40 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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when i look in your eyes
i fall deeper into the sky,
flowing in amazement
full of magic i cant explain,
everything is blank
the world is out of hand,
lost in the twirl
of souls we created,
we are connected
in some magical way,
undescribably beautiful
out of this world,
we met one day
separated next week,
forever hands interlocked
in this fantasy,
everything is gone
nothing is lost,
above the horizon
our soul lingers on...
Copyright ©
eternalsunshine
... [
2008-12-05 23:10:40]
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Re: ....Love Lingers On & On....
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by poeticparadisek on
Saturday, 6th December 2008 @ 12:09:05 AM AEST
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| I LOVE THIS PIECE! it truly is poetic perfection. The way this poem is written... it truly could not afford any revisions. |
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Re: ....Love Lingers On & On....
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by Loende on
Saturday, 6th December 2008 @ 12:21:43 AM AEST
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It IS magic you can't explain. Lovely write. Thank you for sharing it with us.
Be well,
Loende |
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Re: ....Love Lingers On & On....
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 6th December 2008 @ 03:44:59 PM AEST
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very touching and sweet. a good love poem i would say.
-phil |
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Re: ....Love Lingers On & On....
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by PreciousKitten on
Saturday, 6th December 2008 @ 03:51:27 PM AEST
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| i love this piece of words of poem. you should be proud that everyone likes this. |
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