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Smurf Porn
Contributed by
Incognito_Bombastus
on
Sunday, 7th December 2008 @ 09:22:56 PM in AEST
Topic:
ambiguous
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Smurf Porn
So here they run again
It all belongs to them.
The village,
The streets,
Hamlet and electric heath.
Such technicolour,
Such fancy.
Metastasized necromancy.
N- will speak of bread and Circe,
Juvenal of girth and sword
Death below for others Papa.
Snug in your toad stoll
After supper
shades of grey, death on display.
They'll sigh.
Yet in the end
Smurf Nazi's in designer smocks
Will die.
Copyright ©
Incognito_Bombastus
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2008-12-07 21:22:56]
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Re: Smurf Porn
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by Cathi on
Thursday, 11th December 2008 @ 03:41:15 AM AEST
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What an excellent piece of writing! I love the rhythm and the shock imagery - the ambiguity of innocence and death.
Cathi |
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Re: Smurf Porn
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by emystar on
Saturday, 13th December 2008 @ 03:03:29 AM AEST
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This is very creative, thought provoking writing.
Welcome to our global family here at YPDC.
Huggs, blessings,
emy |
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Re: Smurf Porn
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by Voice of the Silent on
Tuesday, 16th December 2008 @ 10:12:36 PM AEST
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Very different I liked it though good write
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Re: Smurf Porn
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by Jenni_K on
Thursday, 18th December 2008 @ 10:02:31 PM AEST
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Interesting imagery... Nicely done..
Jenni |
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Re: Smurf Porn
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by Antzus on
Sunday, 30th August 2009 @ 07:23:31 AM AEST
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This made me laugh. Not sure if that's the right response? :-P
Can't wait for the sequel |
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Re: Smurf Porn
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by Voyager on
Thursday, 16th December 2010 @ 09:34:13 AM AEST
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| very interesting |
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Re: Smurf Porn
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by hardrocker15198916 on
Wednesday, 22nd December 2010 @ 02:53:53 AM AEST
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I could give a one word adjective describing how this poem made me feel or what it made me think. I don't have any constructive criticism, not to say it doesn't need work and I don't have any compliments, not to say it's bad.
Keep writing though. It has a nameless value I suppose. Or do you suppose? Maybe it was Smurfette who supposed, but supposing she did suppose you would suppose because she and I supposedly supposed.
There is no cure for smurf porn. *Sigh* |
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Re: Smurf Porn
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by nirupam on
Sunday, 6th March 2011 @ 11:05:58 PM AEST
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| really provocative in its vocabulary, imagery, and rhythm |
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