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tears of blood
Contributed by
Voice of the Silent
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Tuesday, 9th December 2008 @ 04:12:18 PM in AEST
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I got the title from a friend who wrote a story with the same title. It has a little to do with his story but a little ways through I put a different spin on it hope you like it
Tears of blood
Coming down like rain
Everything turning red with others pain
While I stand and take in the despair
I mean why should I care
Tears of blood
Falling like rain
I stand out in the pain
Taking all the suffering
And I just stand thinking
I think it's contagious because my hearts sinking
but I've gotten used to it over time
In my mind
This is just rain
we walk in everyday
We walk in others pain
Tears of blood
Is just everyday rain
Every rain drop and tear
different
If you look you'll see a face of fear
and despair
there there
in everyday rain
so really rain is just tears of blood
caused by others pain
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Voice of the Silent
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Re: tears of blood
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 9th December 2008 @ 06:01:27 PM AEST
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i liked it, it had a lovely flow to it and some good imagery.
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Re: tears of blood
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by snoopington on
Wednesday, 10th December 2008 @ 05:34:48 AM AEST
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really liked the flow to this,
1st verse very deep.........
well done......
all the best..........
m..............
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