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ethereal satisfaction
Contributed by
kishdaswani
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Thursday, 11th December 2008 @ 04:00:33 PM in AEST
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clouds swirling
hazy visions of the surreal
a celestial glow
fills my body with divine breath
a sublime release of emotions
sorrow and ecstasy unleashed from the depths
this instrument of my existence
drives me to the edges of the earth
invulnerable to pain...
immortal throughout time
satisfaction seems eternal
mortal desires escalate
affections flourish
escalating intoxication
a heavenly state of birth and rebirth
i awaken with the compulsion of further gratification
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2008-12-11 16:00:33]
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Re: ethereal satisfaction
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 11th December 2008 @ 06:46:06 PM AEST
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well i'm gonna guess you're either talking about sex, for which i refer to this bit:
satisfaction seems eternal
mortal desires escalate
affections flourish
escalating intoxication
or you're talking about faith and god, for which i refer to this bit:
clouds swirling
hazy visions of the surreal
a celestial glow
fills my body with divine breath
or have i got it completely wrong? either way it's a great poem.
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